[Artist7]

Hi, everyone! I would really appreciate some feedback on these two commercial reads. Thanks in advance!

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[Artist7]

Hi, Monibr16! This is a very good read! Your tone and energy are both appropriate for the read. My only con would be the sibilance after the words “fits,” “cups,” and “straps.” May want to smooth out the hisses on those “s” sounds.

[Artist7]

Hi, Monibr16! I appreciate you taking the time to listen and provide great feedback!

[Artist7]

Hi, everyone-I’d appreciate feedback on these two short commercial reads. Thanks so much!

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Thank you for taking the time to listen. I appreciate the feedback!

[Artist7]

I really appreciate the feedback-thank you so much!

[Artist7]

Hi, everyone! I would appreciate your comments on two short commercial practice reads. Thanks for your time!

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[Artist7]

Hi, I do hear a difference between the takes, and prefer the second one. It’s a much smoother read and sounds more conversational. Nice job!

[Artist7]

Hi, Thanks for taking the time to listen. I appreciate your feedback!

[Artist7]

Hi, everyone! I’d really appreciate some feedback on these two short commercial reads. Thanks in advance!

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