DillonP
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Your read is good, but too technical, by putting more pace and emotion I think it would come out better, even so keep it up.
I have two new pieces, one a commercial and the other narration. I am right now planning something big right now, so I would appreciate some feedback that can be helpful for me going forward.
Hello everyone, right now I am considering getting my demos made in the next month. And right now I am wanting to get prepared for what is to come. I have a Commercial and Narration piece out and would consider some feed back if possible regarding my annunciation and celerity in my speaking.
That was really good, and it was spot on and clear. From the dialogue I think it should be more upbeat. If you smile more while recording it would vastly improve and get the audience more attached. Other then that I think it was a good piece, Keep at it!
Sorry about the mistake that was pointed out with the two take being played at once here is the fixed one.
You did pretty good with both narration pieces. besides the clicking in the background that was good work.
You have a great voice and sounds perfect. But there is some clicking in the background and much reflection going on in the recording. There is also your tone and emotion which you can put more into. Still keep up the good work.
Hello everyone, Just got a new Narration and Commercial pieces out. Please give out feedback if there are any mistakes I’ve made.
You have a good way of using a different voice. But feels like your not leaving enough space between sentences.
